Assignment 1 Draft One.
Automatic, a SiriusXM Company application, provides information related to the driver, the vehicle, and the journey, reducing the fear of any incidents occurring. The app monitors the safety precautions the driver takes.
If the vehicle is not compatible with the Automatic's self-installation connector and phone application, parts can be installed to the vehicle that will allow it to be compatible with the application, assuming that the vehicle is made in 1996 or after. Automatic (provides a safer drive by monitoring, detecting, and troubleshooting motor issues, providing incident reports to critical contacts, potentially savings costs in incident reporting, and in vehicular management.)aids consumers with a more secure drive along with being more intelligent with apps which troubleshoots motor issues, discover mishaps, dispatching critically messages during needy times, cut cost plus furthermore.
The company has transformed into a link automobile business with the foundation and ability to distribute Automatic into several allocated mediums(SiriusXM, 2017). While there are many similar products in the market, the Automatic app is a relatively useful product that is a cut above the rest as it provides many unique functions.
One such function of the Automatic app is its ability to motivate efficient driving. The app will constantly be observing your vehicle's motor, acceleration sensors, bearings information and would apparently alarm the driver any driving infringements made which increase petrol consumption. Some examples relate to extreme speeding, hasty accelerating, and braking. I find this function particularly useful as it provides one's self the data required to become a more efficient driver. It also makes one's self more conscious about their driving behavior as they are being observed and graded.
Another useful function would be the Automatic's GPS tracker. Not only does it register the whereabouts of your vehicle, it also provides your traveling data (such as your driving duration and length), petrol pricing, and efficient use of petrol. It can also keep track of the amount of travel needed to be done for that particular week. When traveling to your destination, the app will display the previous path used, including the infringements made along that path. You can also tap into past history records, making the app user-friendly.
An essential function that makes Automatic a cut above the rest of its competitors would be its built-in network connectivity which relays information back to Automatic's channels. After installing the adapter, the user will not need to worry about the adapter's actions. It will just naturally function properly. Making the adapter convenient to use as it will just do all the work for you after installation. In addition, the network connectivity is quite smooth, there has never been an issue with the adapter not recording. The only hassle would be that Bluetooth is needed when installing the system. Afterward, the hassle of having your phone speak with the Automatic device will be removed.
In conclusion, Automatic provides many unique features and is a useful app. It keeps track of your traveling behavior and optimises fuel consumption. Overall, the app will provide convenient routes to your destination, enhance the driver's capabilities to drive and reduce the number of infractions made.
About Automatic (n.d). Retrieved September 2019 from
https://www.linkedin.com/company/automatic-labs
Automatic How It Works (n.d). Retrieved September 2019 from
https://automatic.com/how-it-works
R, Matthew Ward (2014). Automatic App Review: For $99, the truth about your car and your driving. Retrieved September 2019 from https://www.pcworld.com/article/2600357/automatic-app-review-for-99-the-truth-about-your-car-and-your-driving.html
Glenn Fleishman (2016). Automatic Pro Review: Be a better driver with this driving data tracker in your car. Retrieved September 2019 from https://www.macworld.com/article/3116113/automatic-pro-review-be-a-better-driver-with-this-driving-data-tracker-in-your-car.html
David Ruddock (2016) Automatic Pro Review: A simple and reliable - but limited - way to analyze your driving. Retrieved September 2019 from https://www.androidpolice.com/2016/09/29/automatic-pro-review-a-simple-and-reliable-but-limited-way-to-analyze-your-driving/
Assignment 1(533 words)
If the vehicle is not compatible with the Automatic's self-installation connector and phone application, parts can be installed to the vehicle that will allow it to be compatible with the application, assuming that the vehicle is made in 1996 or after. Automatic (provides a safer drive by monitoring, detecting, and troubleshooting motor issues, providing incident reports to critical contacts, potentially savings costs in incident reporting, and in vehicular management.)aids consumers with a more secure drive along with being more intelligent with apps which troubleshoots motor issues, discover mishaps, dispatching critically messages during needy times, cut cost plus furthermore.
The company has transformed into a link automobile business with the foundation and ability to distribute Automatic into several allocated mediums(SiriusXM, 2017). While there are many similar products in the market, the Automatic app is a relatively useful product that is a cut above the rest as it provides many unique functions.
One such function of the Automatic app is its ability to motivate efficient driving. The app will constantly be observing your vehicle's motor, acceleration sensors, bearings information and would apparently alarm the driver any driving infringements made which increase petrol consumption. Some examples relate to extreme speeding, hasty accelerating, and braking. I find this function particularly useful as it provides one's self the data required to become a more efficient driver. It also makes one's self more conscious about their driving behavior as they are being observed and graded.
Another useful function would be the Automatic's GPS tracker. Not only does it register the whereabouts of your vehicle, it also provides your traveling data (such as your driving duration and length), petrol pricing, and efficient use of petrol. It can also keep track of the amount of travel needed to be done for that particular week. When traveling to your destination, the app will display the previous path used, including the infringements made along that path. You can also tap into past history records, making the app user-friendly.
An essential function that makes Automatic a cut above the rest of its competitors would be its built-in network connectivity which relays information back to Automatic's channels. After installing the adapter, the user will not need to worry about the adapter's actions. It will just naturally function properly. Making the adapter convenient to use as it will just do all the work for you after installation. In addition, the network connectivity is quite smooth, there has never been an issue with the adapter not recording. The only hassle would be that Bluetooth is needed when installing the system. Afterward, the hassle of having your phone speak with the Automatic device will be removed.
In conclusion, Automatic provides many unique features and is a useful app. It keeps track of your traveling behavior and optimises fuel consumption. Overall, the app will provide convenient routes to your destination, enhance the driver's capabilities to drive and reduce the number of infractions made.
About Automatic (n.d). Retrieved September 2019 from
https://www.linkedin.com/company/automatic-labs
Automatic How It Works (n.d). Retrieved September 2019 from
https://automatic.com/how-it-works
R, Matthew Ward (2014). Automatic App Review: For $99, the truth about your car and your driving. Retrieved September 2019 from https://www.pcworld.com/article/2600357/automatic-app-review-for-99-the-truth-about-your-car-and-your-driving.html
Glenn Fleishman (2016). Automatic Pro Review: Be a better driver with this driving data tracker in your car. Retrieved September 2019 from https://www.macworld.com/article/3116113/automatic-pro-review-be-a-better-driver-with-this-driving-data-tracker-in-your-car.html
David Ruddock (2016) Automatic Pro Review: A simple and reliable - but limited - way to analyze your driving. Retrieved September 2019 from https://www.androidpolice.com/2016/09/29/automatic-pro-review-a-simple-and-reliable-but-limited-way-to-analyze-your-driving/
Assignment 1(533 words)
Dear Benjamin,
ReplyDelete- Grammar and sentences could be improved
-> "enabling them to fear to a smaller extent an incident happening if they were to decide to take their vehicle out for a spin"
- Some sentences are too long, can be separated into 2 or more sentences
- Double spacing at “in order to receive an enhance”
- “automobile designs dated 1996 or after is given the opportunity”
-> Automobile designs dated from 1996 onwards are given the opportunity
- Content includes some features of the product with precise description
- Content includes benefits of the product
- Citation is done very well
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